Ask HN: Anyone good with business plans? I could use some help.

I'm currently a semi-finalist in a University sponsored business plan competition. The deadline is Monday March 15, but I could still use a few more eyes to look over my plan for a start-up in the recording music industry,

If you're interested, shoot me a line: abrandt <at> mail <dot> bradley <dot> edu. I'd love to get some of the collective HN wisdom behind me.