Good morning hackers, seeking criticism
http://kleevr.blogspot.com/2008/04/screaming-tangent.html
Please rip it all to hell if you've got 5 minutes to burn. I'm young, overly ambitious, and (I hope) prepared for a taste of real criticism from those whom I hope with time to consider me a peer.
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[ 3.6 ms ] story [ 33.2 ms ] threadI said I didn't think you were wrong, because I didn't think you managed to use language well enough to rise to the standard of communicating something that would be able to be judged right or wrong. Then I suggested that maybe you were really really really high. Or sleep deprived. Or using a highly technical language I did not know.
Then I thought there was no way someone who actually spoke english as a first language would of wrote that and decided I was an ass making inappropriate fun of someone who didn't speak english as a first language and was making an honest effort to communicate. I don't want to discourage non native english speakers going out on a limb and trying to talk, so I deleted my post.
Knowing you speak english as a first language, I feel better about saying you didn't make any goddamn sense to me with that word jazz.
It's cool I guess that you're thinking so unconventionally that your post would fit in an ee cummings journal.
That movie (it's a B-movie) was based on a short story by Phillip K Dick. And, I used some BNSF grammar.