Just a FYI, I almost flagged your post, given your low karma and a direct link to your product, I assumed it was a fairly decent product spam. The only reason I did not was because I to the time to read your comment history. If you want to avoid the appearance of spamming, might I suggest next time you post some stats in the post and in the comments post a link to your product to avoid people flagging it thinking that it is product spam. I gave you an upvote for almost being a jerk to you and not giving you the benefit of the doubt.
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Count how many times you say any variant of us, we, our, etc, then count how many times you say some variant of you, your, etc. You need to reverse these numbers.
You know i applies your advice to a pice of marketing material I have and was really surprised at what that little change did to improve the message. That is a great suggestion, thank you.
I have been told this advice was written prominently in "How to Win Friends and Influence People" back in 1937... and it still works wonderfully 70+ years later.
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[ 3.9 ms ] story [ 23.9 ms ] threadCount how many times you say any variant of us, we, our, etc, then count how many times you say some variant of you, your, etc. You need to reverse these numbers.