I find it difficult to read articles like this, the content itself is very interesting to me, but it's wrapped in creative writing bullshit like this:
"I’d step off the bus, route through the CL3 barista in my clanking heels, clutch the hot compostable coffee cup to warm both my hands while I walked to my desk, voicing the american greeting of ’heyhowreyouimgood’ to anyone caught in the path of my morning march."
Some people enjoy reading non-fiction full of facts, some people enjoy reading fiction with non-plot-based-fluff. If you don't like the piece, move on to something else. Doesn't really add to the discussion of the story to make a writing style comment.
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[ 2.9 ms ] story [ 16.8 ms ] thread"I’d step off the bus, route through the CL3 barista in my clanking heels, clutch the hot compostable coffee cup to warm both my hands while I walked to my desk, voicing the american greeting of ’heyhowreyouimgood’ to anyone caught in the path of my morning march."