In iOS the UI looks a little rough:
- the two main blocks below the main graphic aren't sized equally and need a margin between them and some padding for the content of each
- The Get Started Now button isn't on the same line as he email address input. Also, this is presumably the Call to Action, but I can't really tell - it should be more emphasized visually
- the Welcome to Popread BETA text needs a margin between it and the header
- rather than straight black and white you might go with a subtle eggshell and deep midnight blue. This will match the yellow star and center graphic while giving a little more visual depth
not sure how much of the above is because I'm on Safari Mobile
Overall: Major props for submittig to HN. I wish you the best!
You are correct, learn more should be easier to find.
As for formality that is coming as I get more feedback, I just wanted to put something out and start to get input. Tech first, copywriting second. I do agree though it is very informal right now.
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[ 0.25 ms ] story [ 16.3 ms ] threadIn iOS the UI looks a little rough: - the two main blocks below the main graphic aren't sized equally and need a margin between them and some padding for the content of each - The Get Started Now button isn't on the same line as he email address input. Also, this is presumably the Call to Action, but I can't really tell - it should be more emphasized visually - the Welcome to Popread BETA text needs a margin between it and the header - rather than straight black and white you might go with a subtle eggshell and deep midnight blue. This will match the yellow star and center graphic while giving a little more visual depth
not sure how much of the above is because I'm on Safari Mobile
Overall: Major props for submittig to HN. I wish you the best!
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Also, you should try to be a bit more formal, right? :D
As for formality that is coming as I get more feedback, I just wanted to put something out and start to get input. Tech first, copywriting second. I do agree though it is very informal right now.