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Ask HN: What suggestion you can give me to improve my article?

1 points by Immortal333 ↗ HN
Hi, HN I have started writing a blog with my friends. I would like you to give some suggestions to improve our blog's quality such that It can be helpful to others.

First article: https://hackeregg.github.io/2020/06/03/Implementing-a-Simple-Redirection-Analytics.html

Any constructive criticism is welcomed.

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I didn't read the entire blog post, but from the first few lines I can tell that English is not your native language. It is pretty good, but there are enough mistakes that it stands out.
Immortal333
Yes, English is not my native language. I think I can tell someone to proofread it and correct my mistakes. Thanks for your feedback.
[dead] xueyongg
I read somewhere about the golden rule of post length, you want your introductions to be clear and to the point with up to 7 sentences. And always end with a clear summary (usually i like to write TLDR) as well to be clear on what your article is truly about.

Personally i've also written some posts over the months and would love to share with you as well. Hope you enjoy (:

https://blog.phuaxueyong.com/post/2020-05-30-6-things-michae...