Ask HN: Is this title good? – “The Fitbit to get your Business in Shape ”

1 points by pauljeba 6y ago ↗ HN

My pre-release campaign is ongoing. The current title is "The Fitbit to get your Business in Shape!". Is this okay? Looking for better ideas. ref- https://www.gox.ai/two-minute-reports/

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uberman 6y ago ↗

Are you or your product affiliated with Fitbit? If not, I think it is a terrible idea.

If you like the concept how about "The Fitness Tracker to Shape Up Your Business". Same idea without the cease and desist hassles.

Note, that I see no problem using "Fitbit for Your Business" as a concept in an in-person sales/investor pitch, just you absolutely cannot market publicly like that.