The general idea of what you're offering is clear. But your copy is missing some critically important information: where does your AI run, how does it get live call audio, and how do you do that in a way that keeps that call audio data private (where "private" here means "CLINQ doesn't have access to it either, even if they wanted to")?
I don't use a voice assistant so perhaps the jargon is not clear to me. For what it is worth, your title here is much clearer for me at least:
If you asked me which is clearer:
"CLINQ provides you with AI-enhanced telephony that automatically completes important tasks during calls, minimizing your wrap-up time."
or
"CLINQ is building a new type of voice assistant."
I would certainly say the second is clearer.
It is also not clear if you are selling a product that someone would install to enhance their existing phone system or if you have some sort of cloud service.
Do I get to keep my existing phone numbers or not? Does this work for land lines and cell phones or only for zoom calls and hangouts or vice versa?
I guess it the end I think you might have something compelling but I really have no idea what it actually is other than an enhanced telephony experience.
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[ 3.0 ms ] story [ 12.8 ms ] threadIf you asked me which is clearer:
"CLINQ provides you with AI-enhanced telephony that automatically completes important tasks during calls, minimizing your wrap-up time."
or
"CLINQ is building a new type of voice assistant."
I would certainly say the second is clearer.
It is also not clear if you are selling a product that someone would install to enhance their existing phone system or if you have some sort of cloud service.
Do I get to keep my existing phone numbers or not? Does this work for land lines and cell phones or only for zoom calls and hangouts or vice versa?
I guess it the end I think you might have something compelling but I really have no idea what it actually is other than an enhanced telephony experience.