Looks good, but, well you’re on HN so I guess you’ll get HN treatment haha.
(note that I’m on mobile; iPhone 6S, for screen size)
The menu btn is placed on the right, I expect the menu to appear in the same vertical axe, instead it’s on the left + there’s no background behind it making both the text on the page and the item list text unreadable.
A comparison, I think, would be a good addition to the why section. (with Exorcism for instance).
Copy is good, but too lengthy. Try to be more succinct. (Read PG’s essay on it; one of my favorites btw)
I think the hero text’s css transition is useless. The way I see it, I’m already not that interested in your product and you make me wait for the most important thing? I’m gone in less than 3 seconds of the website loading.
well xD, Ik where the issue lies in the case of the background being transparent, some tags don't work on Safari from what I've noticed but I'm rolling the fix in the next release ( along with more features ). I'll add the comparison, sure. Will make the transition smaller but trust me, it's not useless. Spontaneous loading of the page is something that doesn't look well so the transition IS important but I think I might've made it too long.
Either way, thanks for the review!
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[ 3.2 ms ] story [ 14.5 ms ] threadLooks good, but, well you’re on HN so I guess you’ll get HN treatment haha.
(note that I’m on mobile; iPhone 6S, for screen size)
The menu btn is placed on the right, I expect the menu to appear in the same vertical axe, instead it’s on the left + there’s no background behind it making both the text on the page and the item list text unreadable.
A comparison, I think, would be a good addition to the why section. (with Exorcism for instance).
Copy is good, but too lengthy. Try to be more succinct. (Read PG’s essay on it; one of my favorites btw)
I think the hero text’s css transition is useless. The way I see it, I’m already not that interested in your product and you make me wait for the most important thing? I’m gone in less than 3 seconds of the website loading.