Ask HN: Tips for Writing?

8 points by jonathancai11 ↗ HN
I've found that splitting my time distinctly into writing vs editing has been really helpful. Writing: blurting everything on the page, no deletions. Editing: Refining what's on the page.

Does anyone have similar tips on writing (whether that be for dev blogs or such)?

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Sleep on it: separate yourself from your writing by a full night's rest before revising

Get feedback: you don't know your writing expresses anything let alone anything it's meant to if you don't test it on people outside of your head (subtip: learn how to ask for feedback - there's an episode of the podcast Start With This [#3 or #4 iirc] that digs into this)

Try to delete half of what you wrote: half of what you wrote is probably trash, confusing, needlessly ornamental, and/or boring.

Spend more time observing and listening. It will make you a better writer.
Vary your sentence length. Don't follow strict length rules for each sentence, as good writing employs a mix of short, medium, and long sentences. Incorporating variety avoids monotonous writing, creates emphasis where needed, and helps the reader understand the relationship between different points.

Write in different environments/context (e.g., write drunk, edit sober).

Refer to the "The Elements of Style" when in doubt concerning style.

I start by writing a quick statement about the purpose and the audience of the piece. I keep it at the top of the document as I outline and flesh out the writing. This ensure the material stays tight and on topic.

Similar to you, I write the material out in a single flow and then revise/edit later. I like to let the piece rest and revise at different sitting or a different day. This way I am able to read and critique the piece with fresh eyes.

I prefer writing in the morning.

I don't use any writing app, just hammer it out in Google Doc, or these days in an EverNote note under a notebook called Writing.

I also like to free-write on a topic from time-to-time to explore and uncover interesting concepts. (Checkout this book on free writing: https://www.amazon.com/Accidental-Genius-Revolutionize-Think...)