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Such a huge fan of her writing
I see her work referenced here and there - what is she known for exactly?

(I personally can't stand the writing style, but I get the appeal.)

"The only thing I know about how to be more prolific? Write about the thing that means the most to you, then write about the thing that means more."

Late 2019 I started writing on a topic I'm passionate about- cheap entry into amateur radio. I wrote more than ever, about 12000 words. Not much by novelist standards, but more than I'd written on any single subject before it. And I have a lot more material to write, once I can find the brain power to sit down and fix it up. One of the subjects of my writing was a product that's been since discontinued (the BITX40 if anyone is wondering) and so it's stagnant- but it's all there and I have more writing to do.

Like a random thoughts or a daily diary entry.
No. More like a structured explanation. A book.
/rant Substack has literally one job: to display written information on a webpage and provide good typography for writers. The most commonly used font - "Spectral" is a complete mess. Kerning is off, letter spacing is too much and word spacing is too little. If someone is reading this at Substack, please for the love of god consult a professional typographer and ask them for a recommendation. If you can't then just use one of the many Google Fonts such as Source Serif Pro. Here is a comparison of how bad it is:

Original, Spectral: https://i.imgur.com/SBS8iQG.png

Source Serif Pro: https://i.imgur.com/AM8KSUC.png

Wow, you're not wrong.
If you are using an ad blocker, you can add the following rules to change the font:

substack.com##body:style(font-family: Arial !important)

It doesn't seem that bad in a dark theme
Spectral might be bad, but I'd not replace it with a serif font.
This is classic form over function. It's been scientifically measured that sans-serif fonts are better for screens with serif best for printed text.

Something like Helvetica with good spacing and high contrast is the best for reading online.

Helvetica is designed for posters and logos. It is a poor typeface to choose for body copy, especially on screens.
This isn’t to dispute serif vs sans-serif.

I’m pointing the letter spacing. Doesn’t matter if it’s serif or sans-serif. If the fitting is bad, it’s going to be difficult to read. The vision system recognizes word shapes and it’s sensitive to how much space is between letters (kerning is a bit different, usually pairs of glyphs).

Orthogonally, can you cite the scientific source that claims sans serif is better on displays? Curious when it was published. I wonder if it still applies to retina displays and hidpi screens.

> It's been scientifically measured that sans-serif fonts are better for screens with serif best for printed text.

Were any of those studies conducted after high DPI displays became commonplace? Other than backlighting, I can't think of much that would distinguish a serif font on a high DPI display from one in print.

Not every screen is high-DPI, and device modality matters too. Being able to touch and trace with your fingers on a smartphone with flexible angles is very different than scrolling text on a monitor. True legibility needs to take into account all of those factors.
Source Serif Pro is truly one of the most beautiful modern web fonts.
I very much agree. It’s exceptional in so many ways.
In terms of priorities, is it fair to say that the main issue here is word spacing? I don't see much difference with the kerning to be honest. For letter spacing, is there any level at which it would be too little?
So I’ve been publishing regularly on my blog for 10 years, over 1500 articles and counting. Ranging from 300 word missives to 3000 word deep digs. A couple books too.

Here’s what I learned:

It’s easier to be prolific. When you write every day it comes easy. Like brushing your teeth. You wake up and you’re full of thoughts on your general topic and you write them down. A quick edit, hit publish, and done. If it goes viral, fantastic. If peopel love it, amazing. If not, no big you try again next time.

And then life happens. You can’t just write every day, you have to create things worth writing about! Experiences, research, work.

You reduce your writing output.

And the ideas dry up. Writing becomes hard. You eke out 2, maybe 3, articles per week and it’s hard work. You struggle. You drag them out of your brain. It doesn’t feel right.

Nothing feels important enough to write about. With 2 at-bats per week, there’s a lot riding on every missive. It’s hard. It’s demoralizing. And it shows in your writing.

The readers can’t tell. Future you can’t tell. Neil Gaiman is right – 5 months from now you won’t see the difference between the writing that was work and the writing that flowed.

But you today, you know. You know you’re rusty. You know it wasn’t as easy as it could be. You see that it’s rough.

And I haven’t found a solution.

A couple of tricks that have worked really well for me over the last two years.

First: weeknotes. Every week I write a summary of what I've got done. I'm on a streak, so I can't let myself break that streak. I'm at 73 weeks now and it's ensured that I write something at least once a week - and like you said, that habit makes it easier. https://simonwillison.net/tags/weeknotes/

Second: TILs. These are basically blog entries where the only criteria is "did I just learn something" - which makes them very low friction. I often knock one out in 5-10 minutes. https://til.simonwillison.net/

I have made this [letter] longer than usual because I have not had time to make it shorter. - Pascal

I think the solution is simple: write constantly, publish rarely.

Asking out of curiosity (and assuming you write as a hobby): what's the point of writing 2-3 per week if you don't think you have any relevant/interesting to say?

I understand that you want to be regular so you don't just "become lazy" and probably to avoid getting stuck, but I don't see neither what's the objective of forcing to do something you don't like - as long as we're talking about a hobby.

> what's the point of writing 2-3 per week if you don't think you have any relevant/interesting to say?

What might not be relevant/interesting to you could well be relevant/interesting to others. There's also the Field Notes philosophy - "I'm not writing it down to remember it later; I'm writing it down to remember it now" - blogging about something can solidify it in your mind because you have to work out how to express / explain it.

I totally relate to this. Even if you never "publish" what you write it has an effect of clarifying what you think. It also makes it possible to develop and refine your thinking because you have a point of reference.

I wrote a post a little while ago where I thought I had a good handle on what I wanted to say. I researched certain elements to make sure what I was saying was backed up. I finished the first draft and thought, "Cool, with a couple of revisions I'll be done".

The funny thing was now that I had clarified my thoughts I began to encounter ideas that refined my perspective further and lead me to new and better ways of looking at the whole thing. This was in part because I was researching more and reading more as time went on but I'm pretty sure I would not have been primed for those breakthroughs if I hadn't already put what I thought in writing.

As it stands, I don't intend to use that first draft and its ideas will reused in something largely different but writing it was invaluable.

I think that original comment answers the what is the point question. When writing often, following happens:

> It’s easier to be prolific. When you write every day it comes easy. Like brushing your teeth. You wake up and you’re full of thoughts on your general topic and you write them down. A quick edit, hit publish, and done. If it goes viral, fantastic. If peopel love it, amazing. If not, no big you try again next time.

When writing only once in a while, following happens:

> You reduce your writing output. And the ideas dry up. Writing becomes hard. You eke out 2, maybe 3, articles per week and it’s hard work. You struggle. You drag them out of your brain. It doesn’t feel right.

So, you write often, to keep yourself in "writing is easy" mode. And you are also probably improving in writing every time you do it little bit. Personally, I have observed the same effect on (different) creative activities. When you do it often, it is easy. When you do it only when you plan masterpiece, it is hard to impossible.

I understood it differently, like if writing so often for OP tend to develop in this unhappy state just by the fact of writing, like if by doing it all the time he/she went "dry" of ideas:

> You can’t just write every day, you have to create things worth writing about! Experiences, research, work.

It seems at some point he/she finds the writing must be something more than just writing

It’s a balance.

C players read B players writing about A players.

You want your writing to be A player stuff. When you fall to B player level or less you’re just an unpaid journalist shouting with the masses.

A level stuff takes time. Time you don’t have if you spend it all on just writing.

Here is my take: Writing is thinking. As long as you have some topic to write about that has been on your mind for a while, writing about it is a wonderful opportunity to structure your thoughts, make explicit and conscious what has thus far been floating around in your unconscious and thereby see the topic more clearly, come to new observations and new conclusions.
> what's the point of writing 2-3 per week if you don't think you have any relevant/interesting to say?

Well the 2 O-1 visas, 1 upcoming greencard (fingers crossed), and ~$250k in infoproduct sales have been nice :)

I rarely feel like I have nothing relevant or interesting to say. When I write daily for 3 weeks straight it gets a little wobbly.

The problem for me is that the brain gets full and I have too many ideas rattling around in there. With a lesser publishing schedule I can create time to write/work on bigger long-term projects (like a book), but what ends up happening are these long HN comments and such because the writing has to go somewhere.

Another issue is that with less publishing, suddenly nothing feels important enough. There's only 2 slots, better make them good! And that's paralyzing.

More slots is better, but then there's no time for longer higher impact projects.

My blog is nearing 5 years and some 600 articles. Five books published so far.

If anything, I grew more careful about frequency. I want my readers to know that if they receive a post notification in mail, it is worth reading. And quality seems to be in a slightly inverted relation to frequency in my case.

But I do not feel 'rusty' until the gap extends to two weeks or so. Which it rarely does.

How do I get started? I use Zettelkasten and have hundreds of pages of notes but can't focus to and don't have the confidence to put them into publishable entries.
> you have to create things worth writing about

Really? Why make writing conditional? And what do you mean by 'worth'? Worth to whom?

I fell into the same bear trap and I ended up blocking myself. The challenge is to step away from attributing self-importance to what you write and make your writing superfluous. There are no rules except for those you encumber yourself with.

For sure, it's perfectly valid to set goals for yourself. Like attaining wide readership, connecting with others, sharing what you know and what you've experienced, establishing an identity for yourself as a writer, contributing to a field of knowledge,... Even so, those are choices you make for yourself, not obligations. You don't owe your readers your writing.

Sol LeWitt wrote a response to Eva Hesse who made the same complaint about the hardships of creation. Here's Benedict Cumberbatch reading that letter:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VnSMIgsPj5M

Both artists became front-runners of post-modernism and post-minimalism.

Now, none of the above implies that selecting, curating, editing, reviewing, reflecting,... should go out of the window. It means that when you sit at your desk - feet in the air, shooting pencils at your ceiling, thinking about what you're going to write - becoming acutely aware of how you judge yourself in the back of your head and being able to step back from that becomes a valuable skill.

Per Neil Gaiman, your Inner Inquisition won't even remember the finer details of the hour long questioning sessions it submitted your thought process to in 5 months time.

>With 2 at-bats per week

Does this refer to the baseball 'at bat' or some other writing terminology, please? Thank you.

It’s the baseball metaphor. If it takes 10 at-bats to produce an article that resonates, you’d prefer to get there in 2 weeks than in 2 months.
Wow impressive. Which external benefits did you see from writing this past 10 years?

Some questions I might have...

- Are people reaching you out to work with you?

- Any deals thanks to your blog?

- Are People influenced in what you write about?

- Anything else?

The 2 O-1 visas and upcoming greencard have been pretty solid outcomes. As has the roughly $250k in infoproduct sales, a consulting business, and now SFBA dayjobs.

All directly and indirectly thanks to my writing.

> you have to create things worth writing about

Sure, but how about you intertwine the process of creating things and writing about them?

I don't remember the exact reference but I remember reading an article by someone who uses something like a Zettelkasten to write down his thoughts and insights in small digestable pieces and then creates an outline for an article / a book once a pattern of thought emerges and he feels ready.

I really liked this approach as you don't need to filter yourself in your daily writing practice – no one will read your notes, so it's okay if they're not perfect or relevant to millions of people or whatever.

EDIT: Found the reference! It wasn't Zettelkasten but Evergreen note-taking (though the author does reference Zettelkasten):

https://notes.andymatuschak.org/z3PBVkZ2SvsAgFXkjHsycBeyS6Cw...

It is my ambition to say in ten sentences what others say in a whole book. - Nietzsche

I wish this were the motto of all writers. There is already too much “sentence inflation” online...succinctness needs a comeback.

This thing of having one or two long paragraphs of rambling text before the writer actually gets to the point is something I find annoying.

It is so common nowadays that I find myself automatically skipping the first paragraph altogether.

I find her articles a bit too long and flowery as well, but I personally enjoyed reading the first story. And for some reason people on HN seem to like it.
I think these things go in cycles, and have more to do with stylistic preference than objective value.

I've recently been reading essays by G.K Chesteron and William Hazlitt. They are incredibly verbose by modern standards. They spend many long sentences teasing out shades of meaning and subtle implications. They take extremely long run-ups to their topic, often starting with several paragraphs on something that seems unrelated before cleverly integrating it into the main thesis. Instead of clearly stating a thesis and arguing for it, they often layer related concepts and arguments, and they expect the reader to figure out the associations, analogies, and references. But both writers are widely acknowledged to been masters of prose style

Some people appreciate "a fancy prose style" in the same way they appreciate complex music. It's more about using language and argument to craft something intricate and elegant than a plain information dump.

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Yup, it's on writing more, not on writing something useful. They chose quantity over quality.

For what it's worth, it's long and rambling. The abject incoherence of their writing fails to hold your attention.

> I needed write about it ...

> you’ll run out of things write about ...

> I take that as a sign that to not hold anything back.

> in the guise of letting you knowing me better

The article is riddled with various typos.

Let me refer to this HN commentary:

Most of What We Read on the Internet is Written by Insane People

https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=18881827

There's a human on the other end of this who has put a lot of time into creating this article.

For what it's worth, I agree with you. But I think this criticism could have been phrased more constructively.

For instance, 'Most of What You Read on the Internet is Written by Insane People' is a perfectly fine article in isolation, but to bring it up in direct response to an article is tantamount to calling the author insane.

Out of curiosity, did you copy and paste this article into some grammer-checker to identify these typos? I didn't spot any of these during my (admittedly quick) initial read, and having something like this would be helpful for my own writing.
How much content is too much? Is the job of the writer merely to produce more and more content?

New TV series which are slowly converting every original work of art into something that can be passively consumed on the couch. And the remakes and resurrections and remixes of proven favourites. More podcasts than there are hours in the week. Reams of self-published books, endless blog posts, often highly detailed and very well researched. Then all the tweets, social media posts, videos, not to mention very high quality youtube content...

It's a deluge. I find myself paralysed sometimes, unable to choose what to look at next. Being a content creator (artist?) must surely become dminished in the face of this overwhelming amount of content.

It isn't going away, this democratisation of content publishing. But I wonder if we will ever have any 'classics' ever again.

Maybe the classics are classics because of the time they were written in and you KNOW this as a reader. If you read a classic with a new cover, new title, and believe it's from a contemporary author, it might be garbage.

Also: less books and fewer authors in the past, so some books bubble to the top and are considered a classic for several reasons. Many people read them. Nowadays, everything is more fragmented, which can be a good thing.

I don’t really care if “we” don’t like Louis CK anymore, he did one weird thing that he has surely learned his lesson about, but even saying that buys into the idea of the court of public opinion: CK is an artist and like any artist I believe his works should be taken as-is. This new world on social media steroids has everyone thinking that they’re a public person and that their private consumption of culture and their stated public opinion somehow matters and needs to be curated. It doesn’t.

I’ll listen to black metal music made by a murderer and I’ll watch stand up made by a guy who offended someone by masturbating if I feel like it, and I suggest any thinking person applies their own preferences to the culture they consume rather than buy into this societal image of “public responsibility” that is hypocritical beyond imagination. Just drop it, live your life and let others live theirs. We already have a relatively well functioning system for prosecuting crimes, your public statements and outrage isn’t needed, regardless of how important and jacked in to the zeitgeist they make you feel.

As drinkers of the HN fire hydrant, we value terseness. So I suspect you, like I, clicked here much as a conservative might click on a liberal's defense of SF's homeless policy: what's it all about? At 2000+ words, this article merely adds to our confirmation bias that people need to get the point in far fewer words than they currently do in all media.