1) Believe it or not "Effortlessly" is a very confusion way to say "Easily"
2) "With our iphone app and web app". Maybe "Using your Iphone"
3) It says selling something, but I am not sure if this is a digital locker or an app allowing me to sell something.
Overall simplify your copy and tell the user what it does. I am saying this because the screenshot shows a nice interface, and there seems to be something interesting here. Only problem is I cannot put my finger on it.
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[ 3.0 ms ] story [ 12.8 ms ] thread2) "With our iphone app and web app". Maybe "Using your Iphone"
3) It says selling something, but I am not sure if this is a digital locker or an app allowing me to sell something.
Overall simplify your copy and tell the user what it does. I am saying this because the screenshot shows a nice interface, and there seems to be something interesting here. Only problem is I cannot put my finger on it.