Not sure on the content itself as it needs an email, but the website looks exactly like one of those "Buy our eBook now only $49 for the first 50 people, make millions today!"
I get instantly put off by these kind of designs so my only suggestion would be to improve the initial look of the page.
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[ 3.9 ms ] story [ 13.3 ms ] threadI get instantly put off by these kind of designs so my only suggestion would be to improve the initial look of the page.