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Does the landing page have Crystal-clear messaging?

1 points by ayushjangra ↗ HN
Hey,

We launched our landing page https://grabee.com/ and would love your valuable feedback! Currently, we are in the waitlist phase.

Specifically, if you can tell me:

- Do you like the look of the site? [The first impression]

- Does the website tells you how the product works?

- Does the website message positioning communicate the value proposition?

Any kind of feedback (even a very harsh one) is very welcome!

Thank you in advance for your time!

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NickRandom
Note: The following are the opinions of a random internet stranger and should be taken in that light. Also, whenever and where-ever possible I try to be more positive than negative in the spirit of HN submissions and comments.

With that out the way - 1st impressions - Yuck! I had to hit page down 14 times to reach the footer of the landing page. Waaaay too many imo. First impression on Lede/Header/Hook - Remove the 'cutesy' emojis/icons. The 'Join Wait-list' button is too prominent and should (imo) be in green and placed in upper right hand side of page.

Second press of 'page down' ... Daaah Fugg???? I had no idea what I was looking at.

Third press of 'page down' ... Great, finally something informative and a CTA. Problem is - that section of the page is in a different style/layout than 1st & 2nd screen.

Fourth press of 'page down' ... a continuation of section above but again, the layout... urgh.

Fifth press of 'Page Down' .... Nice and clean and informative. Shame that it is 5 pages down and I am by now rapidly losing interest in pressing 'page down' to find out more but do so anyway because I'm trying to give you a fair viewing.

Sixth press of page down.... Odg, I'm losing the will to live here.... The spinning logos are giving me flash-backs to the days of the Marque tag and spinner logos.

I made it all the way to the end and it was more of the same.

TLDR; Did not like. The Design is too cluttered and should be broken up in to separate pages, Styling and design is inconsistent. and to answer your last two questions - No and No.

Like I said, personal opinion only and others' might love it. Also – the opinions of a random person are worth exactly a hill of beans and free advice is seldom worth what you paid for it so don’t feel too bad.

XCSme
First impression is that it looks pretty clean, but I am not really fond of the full-width layout.

> announce user feedback I am not sure I understand what "announce user feedback" means.

As far as I understand, it is like a https://canny.io/ alternative.

> Collect and manage user feedback from different platforms in one place and avoid duplicate user feedbacks.

I don't understand how it collects feedback from different platforms, do I have to link my GMail to it? Also, I don't think "feedback" has a plural.

UX issue: The scrollbar is not visible and page has too much info/is too long.