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Roast My Landing Page

4 points by lemoneyeo ↗ HN
I’m optimising the homepage lemon.io and need the help of the community.

We are targeting startups and the visual brand and tone of voice played a good role in our growth. I see there are a lot of things that make me doubt it.

Our conversion is a bit below of I would expect. I’m building a list of assumptions that will test within the next 3 months.

Looking for feedback on: • copy • design • trust

Thank you.

10 comments

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alexfromapex
It took me way to long to figure out what it was about. Needs better headline copy. Also, took the page like 3-4 seconds to load which isn't terrible but it's not optimized either.
andygor
So why did you decide to change it?
1970-01-01
way too much to scroll through.
lemoneyeo
What would you cut?
1970-01-01
All of it. Focus your main page on your best service and stuff the rest behind a hamburger button.