Give me feedback on my homepage/startup

I'm starting a new company and I'm looking for some blunt unbiased feedback on our homepage design.

The image is available here: http://dataholder415.files.wordpress.com/2008/11/login11-9-08.png

It would be awesome if I could get people's thoughts. Specifically:

1) Is it clear what we are doing?/What do you think we do? 2) Do you like our tagline? 3) Is it clear what a web computer is? 4) What do you rate this homepage on from a 1-10? 5) Any other thoughts

Thanks

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[dead] RobertHenderson 17y ago ↗

I rate it a 6/10. Colors could be improved.

pedalpete 17y ago ↗

the look isn't as important as getting the message across of that you do. I don't think the tagline has any meaning in the context (or lack there of) which you've given.

Basically, I have absolutely no idea what a web computer is.

Get to the basics 1) what is it 2) why would I use it

inimino 17y ago ↗

1) Is it clear what we are doing?/What do you think we do?

Not too clear. You ... give away thin clients?

3) Is it clear what a web computer is?

It's a complete mystery to me, but maybe your site's actual visitors will have more context or will already have some idea what you are doing.