Ask HN: My First Short Story

Excited to share my first English short story here . As some of you might know , I have been writing short stories on my native language (#tamil) for a few years now and published a few short story collections etc!

Writing on my native language never really presented a problem as it was my first language. But I hesitated a lot in writing in a second language. Main reason being my lack of reading on English literature. so I took my time to write this one out ..

do read and let me know your comments and as all the rookies say - " go easy on me "

Story here

https://writervivek.com/2024/05/the-omnipotent-a-short-story...