Well, the design is a little wonky: the size of the logo text and the color of the logo make my eyes look to the left first, but then the size of the text and the boldness of the sign up label on the right also makes me want to look there. Let the parts of the page flow from one to the next more easily. I'd also suggest replacing the "We ... distractions" to something like" with the "Keep ... interest". Good luck.
It's better, but the problem now is that there is a massive gap on one side, and text floating around on the other. Try to put the sign up text above the email address form and decrease the vertical gap.
Much better. Now I would make the "Sign up now for early access!" text vertically align with the text on the left. You should probably also use the same colors for your background as you do for your logo, since they look like pale shades of the same color.
The problem I had when I visited your site was I could not quite understand what the product was about. I was not convinced enough to provide my email and expect a positive result.
Use the video to tell us what you are building, what it does (will do) and/or how awesome the team building it is. Bring the product to life!
We are working on it right now, but we have quoted some explanation video studios, and the minimium price that we found is U$3000 that is quite expensive for us, since we are a bootstraping company.
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Any feedback would be appreciated.
Here is something I threw together. Maybe you can try a split test?
http://i.imgur.com/N6fEk.jpg
The problem I had when I visited your site was I could not quite understand what the product was about. I was not convinced enough to provide my email and expect a positive result.
Use the video to tell us what you are building, what it does (will do) and/or how awesome the team building it is. Bring the product to life!
Hope that helps some!
How about a graphic like this instead: http://goo.gl/Zu7Hq ?
I'd make a bet you could make one yourself in a few short hours.