I understand getting triggered by em dashes in a comment section - nobody uses them like that, right? But in an editorial piece? That's where you expect to see them. At least that's what I thought...
Ok... that title should have a comma, not an em dash. If you're going to complain about having them being removed, you have to use them properly at least.
And then
" It seems I have two choices now—keep using em dashes with a sort of stubborn, curmudgeonly pride until all my clients stop exchanging money for words, or start writing incredibly long run-on sentences, like this, with commas all over the place … and maybe ellipses too; ideas connected by semicolons. "
That should be a colon after "two choices". (There's also clearly more than two options, one of which does not involve run-on sentences with his otherwise poor grammar. James seems like a shitty prose crafter if he's unable to avoid run-ons.)
As a non-native English speaker, I will not be mistaken as AI for a while.
Occasionally, I will introduce a small typo just to make sure people don;t think this is AI.
I don't know if it's language or a different era, but I've not really used an em dash. I just use a dash. - versus -- and I did not really start seeing it until LLM's.
This em dash thing has become a meme of sorts, and a pain for anyone who actually writes for a living and/or uses iOS/macOS and it’s automatic formatting.
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Right? Am I the crazy one?
My protest is to use em dashes more. Why not? They’re great. Who cares if AI also uses them.
I did not know that. I just memorized en dash was shorter in length than em dash. If it also corresponds to an "n" length, I'll be delighted.
And then " It seems I have two choices now—keep using em dashes with a sort of stubborn, curmudgeonly pride until all my clients stop exchanging money for words, or start writing incredibly long run-on sentences, like this, with commas all over the place … and maybe ellipses too; ideas connected by semicolons. "
That should be a colon after "two choices". (There's also clearly more than two options, one of which does not involve run-on sentences with his otherwise poor grammar. James seems like a shitty prose crafter if he's unable to avoid run-ons.)
Or is this just Wintermute manipulating my behaviors for its own ends?
add surrounding spaces to the dash !
it's grammatically correct (but typically uncommon). visually looks more balanced to boot!