Show HN: Moonfall (moonfall.layogtima.com)

Hallo HN, wrote a short sci-fi story called Moonfall.

It got stuck in my teeth and I couldn't shake it off, and here's where I've reached right now.

If you read it, would LOVE your take! I've not written for YEARS, and I wanted to get back to it.

Disclaimer on AI usage: Used Claude Sonnet for iterating through this