It is not obvious that there is a demo behind the logo. I didn't find it and I would have never found it. It would be better if there was a message mentioning it, like:
Think of it as my Fireman "Golf11" channel that was giving us orders that we could fulfill or reject (bcs busy). A civilian channel complementary to 911 would be helpful in "war time" (Sandy) or in peace time ("bake some cakes for School party")
I like the design and the ux. Task management is a pain in the backside and I'm still searching for something that will actually work for me, for both my personal to-dos and the organizations and groups that I help manage. I do agree with jeffclark that it would be a great improvement to better communicate the pain it solves and who it's for like smack bang at the top of the frontpage e.g. "Awesome task distribution for teams" or something. And getting rid of the about in PDF form and make it html instead would probably also be a good thing.
- As Jeff pointed out, it wasn't immediately clear what this did. After playing around with it I got it, but stating it in plain words on the homepage would likely help your conversions.
- Similarly the "Apply for a subdomain now!" heading would be better suited being used to tout the benefit to the customer. Meaning, your visitors don't care about applying for a subdomain. They care about collaboratively completing a task (maybe) so gear your headlines and copy towards that.
- It wasn't clear that the logo leads you to a demo -- I had to read it here that that was the case.
- When I hover over the "enter a task" field in the demo my cursor turns into a circle with a line through it and I can't click. I'm not sure if that's intentional because the functionality isn't there yet or a bug with the implementation in my browser.
I signed up and am looking to seeing where this goes.
Great feedback. Thx. The Subdomain is to see who could become a paying customer. We thought Matt.says.do and matt@says.do could be simple way to communicate "on this channel (says.do) I need your help for these tasks".
After reading the PDF file and comments here I still don’t get the advantage, except having the task management functionality as a cool URL . Isn’t this a function of project management tools? Can’t I even perform this function using generic tools such as twitter? Would you mind to provide a use case or a scenario to clarify? Thanks.
Use case eg.: a Startup office is inundated by Sandy, I ask my team, friends (people I can ask for help in my contacts) to bring brooms + a pump +... now! and I want to have instant feedback if somebody takes care of it, who, or how many, and who can not do it. Them, just click yes or no.
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You should also link to the PDF that explains a little more: http://simon.says.do/assets/documents/simonsays.pdf
Or even what it does.
Few suggestions:
- As Jeff pointed out, it wasn't immediately clear what this did. After playing around with it I got it, but stating it in plain words on the homepage would likely help your conversions.
- Similarly the "Apply for a subdomain now!" heading would be better suited being used to tout the benefit to the customer. Meaning, your visitors don't care about applying for a subdomain. They care about collaboratively completing a task (maybe) so gear your headlines and copy towards that.
- It wasn't clear that the logo leads you to a demo -- I had to read it here that that was the case.
- When I hover over the "enter a task" field in the demo my cursor turns into a circle with a line through it and I can't click. I'm not sure if that's intentional because the functionality isn't there yet or a bug with the implementation in my browser.
I signed up and am looking to seeing where this goes.
Congrats on launching!
Explaining why it exists, how it works and what it does; the problem, the solution.
The WHY is missing - WHY do you offer it? Why does it exist? - WHY should I care? - WHY should I be a part of what you do? - WHY do I need it?
Related: "Start With Why" http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qp0HIF3SfI4
Besides that I wish your project all the best. It looks very interesting!