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AI?

Used the exact same rhetorical device twice in three sentences. A human writer would have added emphasis to the second occurrence at least...

I generally quit reading when I see signs the author has never read their own work

I did not get that impression at all. What rhetorical device are you referring to?
Maybe not. I misread the structure. Look for "required reading" and you'll find the two sentences.
Never knew of Golding’s post-Flies bibliography. Sounds like it’s worth diving into! And wonder if his relationship to Monteith is worth some sort of dramatization.