This writing is among the most beautiful anti-slop writing I've seen in a while -- there's such an essential humanity here that is captured brilliantly and beautifully in the language, pacing, punctuation, and content.
She chose one direction and it wore down her trudging shoes just a little more on one side, and little by little the imbalance in her shoes increased to the point that going the opposite direction would be uncomfortable.
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I wonder if she was going clockwise or counterclockwise?