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I got about halfway through this and I am more confused than I've ever been.

I think it's good, but I'm not entirely sure.

I ran across this a couple years ago and just reread it today. I love how the narrator is about as confused by the girls as we are, and basically completely ignores what they say and focuses on progressing the night.

For instance, the second girl talks about seeing insect-eyed and winged people in Rio, and he just responds "uh, do you want to dance?". It definitely makes me realize that I've witnessed conversations at similar parties where one person(usually the girl in a girl/boy pair) could basically say anything without changing the flow of the conversation.

I liked his short stories from Angels and Visitations
Sooo..what happened at the end?
SPOILER: I think Stella was male?
I personally kinda read it as his friend wasn't anywhere near as experienced as was assumed, and she wanted more than he was ok with. Or maybe you're right. Its ambiguous intentionally I'd assume.
Hint: Vic says, "They're just girls. [...] They don't come from another planet." This is a classic example of Chekhov's gun.
Stella is a boy?
It's a great meta comment on just how alien it can feel to talk to someone you aren't comfortable with.
Cool I guess but seems innapropriate for HN