Ask HN: Why is our new (IoT) website not translating into more conversions?
We've designed a whole new website, with a experience kind of different to what we believe most people are accustomed too (the interactions part).
But so far, this hasn't translated into more contacts from clients.
Is it because of the copy? Is it because people stop at the interactions page and don't check the rest of the website? It's our portfolio?
I'm interested in knowing the point of view from HN people.
URL: http://whitesmith.co
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[ 5.0 ms ] story [ 28.9 ms ] threadHere are my recommendations:
1. You need to spend a lot of time in your Google Analytics to see where things are going wrong.
2. You should use something like Sessioncam to let you view real people coming to your website.
3. Take something like the service at usertesting.com and have people try and complete various tasks on your website.
Those three things alone will make it extremely clear as to where the problems are for you better than comments on here ever will I suspect.
Do you have any suggestions on how to fix some of the problems? (If not, that's ok.)
It's okay if you want to create an interactive part of the site, but make the user navigate to that part of the site. For example, if you are IoT company as you say, maybe have a page within the site that lets a user walk through a house or office clicking on various objects to interact with them. Show possibilities with IoT objects such as thermostats, lights, clocks, appliances, etc...
Thanks for commenting. 1 - Can you please clarify that you were talking about the landing page (interactions), or about the team page (whitesmith.co/team). 2- What do you mean about being "at least a little work related and POSITIVE"?
That would help us see where to start solving the issues. :)
2. "He uses his guitar to pick up girls", "He spends way too much time dealing with css animations and transitions", "Still has some trouble undestanding why everyone else doesn't think dashboards are so freakin' sexy." Those don't seem proper to me, but maybe it's cultural difference. They're irrelevant to your work and even negative (who want's to pay a guy who spends "too much time" on something?). I understand the aim was to show those people as interesting humans but I would rather learn about them being professional first.
It wasn't until I found your github repo that I realized you're a ruby/rails web development shop and that your definition of "full-stack" means both CSS and Javascript.
The worst thing is, if you're a web development shop, you're selling your ability to communicate, to engage users, and turn them into customers. My #1 take away from that page is, "how can you sell my product if you can't even sell yourselves?"
Kudos for not using Yet Another Bootstrap Landing Page. But there's a reason that so many people use that template; that standard landing page makes it easy to communicate an elevator pitch about your product and invites a clear call to action. That should be the minimum bar for you to replicate.
You definitely need to spend some time in Mixpanel or Google Analytics & work out where people are bouncing (most likely the home page).
Something to reduce bounce that you can look at implementing: Add sections to the bottom of every page that drive navigation through to a next relevant page. For example, at the bottom of the About page, include a section such as 'View our Projects >'.
Which brings me to the next issue - where are your projects? Where is your work? Where are your clients logos, testimonials? Where's the copy of the challenges your client's had & the copy of your solutions? You need to do more than one 14px, 30% transparent heading (on a white bg btw) to show 'Happy Clients'.
nb: I don't work there.
Here you say that you are doing things for IoT, however there is literally no evidence of that in either the landing page or the homepage.
Your landing page give you a choice to look at "interaction" but it lags the living shit on my retina macbook. Still I have no clue as what you guys do. There was a temperature sensor on there somewhere. Thats a start.
So I try and press back, but can't because its disabled (ARGH!)
I then go to the website proper, and its lots of whitespace with a list of websites, with no explanation of what you guys did.
I finally noticed the menu system on the top right, clicked on it, and way presented with lots of mock static that once again lagged my browser.
The key take away here is that you need to show it to you mum/dad/sister/disinterested relative/partner. If they struggle, or ask, 'what does it do?' or 'whats it for?' start again completely from scratch.
If you are IoT people, why do you not have any examples of you work? I want to see hardware! (its not IoT unless there is hardware.) I want to see the problem you are solving. After all you might have thought about something in a new way that makes me want to do business with you.
I know its not fashionable, and in somecases orthogonal to what some angel investors are after, but be specific, down to the point, show your wares.
read this: http://www.amazon.co.uk/Ogilvy-Advertising-David/dp/18537561...
then find what you are trying to sell, and sell it in plain terms. You are offering webdesign to businesses? they are coming to you because they don't understand web technologies. If your unable to communicate the essence of what you provide to the normal man, you are sunk at the landing page.