After reading the deck I have no idea what exactly do you do. Given that it's in the context of "investing money", lack of this information makes me think it's a scam.
Wealthfront and Betterment provide a service similar to what I think you plan to do except I understand how they work: they take my money and invest it in stock or bonds based on my risk profile.
You take my money and do what exactly with it to grow it? The deck doesn't say and that's kind of the most import part.
You talk about blockchain which alludes to some connection to bitcoin but don't explain what does it have to do with investing money.
My advice: make it clear how exactly are plan to grow $N dollars I give you into $N + $M dollars.
If it's by introducing another fake money like BitCoin, then thanks but no thanks. Your deck mentions how people don't trust Wall Street. How do you expect people to trust BitCoin-like currency after so many bitcoin exchanges were either hacked or scams to begin with and loosing people's money?
Thank you so much for the comments, since I come from finance and the Bitcoin/Ethereum community I evidently bypassed some concepts that need to be explained.
>After reading the deck I have no idea what exactly do you do.
This is unacceptable and I'm definitely going to add information about investment plans vs smart investment plans.
>Wealthfront and Betterment provide a service similar to what I think you plan to do except I understand how they work: they take my money and invest it in stock or bonds based on my risk profile.
It is exactly that + a trust service that will do what you instruct in case the user dies or some other specific event. But with AI smart contracts on the blockchain.
Once you create the SIP (smart investment plan) it is incorruptible and resilient in the network. I will ad info about that!
>My advice: make it clear how exactly are plan to grow $N dollars I give you into $N + $M dollars.
Excellent, this is amazing advice. Will add a slide with this.
>...fake money like Bitcoin...
It's not a new coin. Ethereum is rather a distributed blockchain network like Bitcoin, but built for smart programs. Developers can build decentralized apps (dapps) and the logic resides in the network. Consequently you can build decentralized autonomous organizations (DAOs), smart contracts, and other distributed stuff that is resilient and may replace some traditional services.
Thx so much again! Will alert you here when I improve the deck.
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[ 2.9 ms ] story [ 21.9 ms ] threadI present the pitch deck of my startup Etherplan. I made it similar to the super pitch deck of Airbnb:
http://www.slideshare.net/benjaminevans/air-bed-breakfast-pi...
I read on Quora that it's a good idea to open it for discussion and to improve it.
Your feedback is more than welcome!
Wealthfront and Betterment provide a service similar to what I think you plan to do except I understand how they work: they take my money and invest it in stock or bonds based on my risk profile.
You take my money and do what exactly with it to grow it? The deck doesn't say and that's kind of the most import part.
You talk about blockchain which alludes to some connection to bitcoin but don't explain what does it have to do with investing money.
My advice: make it clear how exactly are plan to grow $N dollars I give you into $N + $M dollars.
If it's by introducing another fake money like BitCoin, then thanks but no thanks. Your deck mentions how people don't trust Wall Street. How do you expect people to trust BitCoin-like currency after so many bitcoin exchanges were either hacked or scams to begin with and loosing people's money?
>After reading the deck I have no idea what exactly do you do.
This is unacceptable and I'm definitely going to add information about investment plans vs smart investment plans.
>Wealthfront and Betterment provide a service similar to what I think you plan to do except I understand how they work: they take my money and invest it in stock or bonds based on my risk profile.
It is exactly that + a trust service that will do what you instruct in case the user dies or some other specific event. But with AI smart contracts on the blockchain.
Once you create the SIP (smart investment plan) it is incorruptible and resilient in the network. I will ad info about that!
>My advice: make it clear how exactly are plan to grow $N dollars I give you into $N + $M dollars.
Excellent, this is amazing advice. Will add a slide with this.
>...fake money like Bitcoin...
It's not a new coin. Ethereum is rather a distributed blockchain network like Bitcoin, but built for smart programs. Developers can build decentralized apps (dapps) and the logic resides in the network. Consequently you can build decentralized autonomous organizations (DAOs), smart contracts, and other distributed stuff that is resilient and may replace some traditional services.
Thx so much again! Will alert you here when I improve the deck.
Best
http://etherplan.com/etherplan-pitch-deck-v6.pdf
Thx!