Is this good high-concept pitch for Writer.is?

1 points by IvarsIndriks ↗ HN
I'm meeting investors for http://writer.is And need high concept pitch. I got this one "Typewriting on wallpaper" Is this good?

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I clicked your link, and clicked "How it works?" and was taken to a registration page. Is that intentional? Why would I sign up for something that I have no clue what it is?