First thought... Spam. Second and third thoughts... Still spam. If this is a legitimate idea, you really need to clean up the writing quality before anyone will take you seriously.
Initial thoughts, it looks good. It definitely has the feel of a real newspaper site. The writing isn't quite as polished. The ideas are good, but every so often you hit a sentence that makes you go "What?" An example…
First thought... Spam. Second and third thoughts... Still spam. If this is a legitimate idea, you really need to clean up the writing quality before anyone will take you seriously.
Initial thoughts, it looks good. It definitely has the feel of a real newspaper site. The writing isn't quite as polished. The ideas are good, but every so often you hit a sentence that makes you go "What?" An example…