Definately a good start! But I am not sure it is accessible for a person that had no prior knowledge in the field. It appears the target audience is not assumed to have any. So it is still too complicated. The concept…
Definately a good start! But I am not sure it is accessible for a person that had no prior knowledge in the field. It appears the target audience is not assumed to have any. So it is still too complicated. The concept…