That's infinitely better than what you wrote before. I think if you take a step back from your screen and look at the visual shape of what you just wrote, and the visual shape of the original story text, you can see how…
I'd like to try it, but I can't find any sample chapter.
It sounds really complicated. My mind fogged over on point 1. Can you work out a way to make it simpler to understand? You talk about the increase of spam RSVPs. I've never seen that problem - can you make me understand…
That's infinitely better than what you wrote before. I think if you take a step back from your screen and look at the visual shape of what you just wrote, and the visual shape of the original story text, you can see how…
I'd like to try it, but I can't find any sample chapter.
It sounds really complicated. My mind fogged over on point 1. Can you work out a way to make it simpler to understand? You talk about the increase of spam RSVPs. I've never seen that problem - can you make me understand…