> You should consider the first version a throwaway. If you start out knowing that you are writing something that will be trashed, why would you invest yourself in it? It's hard to tell someone to build something that…
> This guy isn't in charge, so he blames young people and assumes they are in charge. What makes you think he's not "in charge"? > Young people are just followers. They follow the money, they do what they're told, they…
Better summary: A man (who has enjoyed his career for the challenges it brings regardless of the pay level) is frustrated that the majority of his current peers don't seem to share the same passion for the work that he…
> You should consider the first version a throwaway. If you start out knowing that you are writing something that will be trashed, why would you invest yourself in it? It's hard to tell someone to build something that…
> This guy isn't in charge, so he blames young people and assumes they are in charge. What makes you think he's not "in charge"? > Young people are just followers. They follow the money, they do what they're told, they…
Better summary: A man (who has enjoyed his career for the challenges it brings regardless of the pay level) is frustrated that the majority of his current peers don't seem to share the same passion for the work that he…