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I don't read many academic papers, but are the summaries normally 3 pages alone?

It reminded me of this YouTube video: https://youtu.be/vtIzMaLkCaM

The instructor in the video covers why academics struggle getting published because they're used to writing for individuals who are paid(E.g TAs & Profs) to read what they wrote.

I don't think the initial three pages are to be viewed as article summary in this case, but rather as background to the issue at hand. The post appears to be something akin to a (very?) late draft, and of a book chapter rather than a journal article. I expect there will be an "abstract" published somewhere, but this isn't where.
Abstracts should be less than a page in any discipline (at least the ones I've encountered - computer science, maths, geography, linguistics, Eng. lit...).

Good "unstructured" (section-less) abstracts are about three paragraphs long and follow the structucture "what is the problem?" - "What is the state of the art regarding solution proposals?" - "Shortcomings of these that motivated this paper" - "What is proposed here as an alternative?" - [What are the key results?].

People are divided as to whether results should go into the abstract: some say the abstract should be a teaser that entices people to read the paper, others say the abstract should be a self-contained distillation of the paper itself.

Structured abstracts are often nearly a page (common in the life sciences): they have explicit section headings like "Method", "Data", "Findings" etc., which is a great idea and should be embraced in all empirical disciplines at least, IMHO.

This video is fantastic. I recommend it. However, that's not my take at all.

My take for this video at the time I watched it was that as students we are used to write for teachers who are paid to grade us, and may take bad habits we can get away with as a consequence, but that will not be enough the day we write for people who are not forced to read what we write. But again, teachers won't expect a journal article written with suspense and stuff when they read your dissertation.

Academic writing is simply not at all the same exercise as journalism. Expectations are different, sometimes opposite.

There's no reason a scientist who write good papers will write good articles, and vice versa. Writing well will help a lot in both cases but that's not sufficient.

Many researchers don't write that well, but if your paper is not comprehensible, it will be rejected. As a researcher, you also want your research to be worthwhile usually, that's a motivation to write better. Also, the point of a paper is to report some discovery. People reading your papers are your reviewers (who are not paid for this, it's just extra work for them usually!), and people who need to understand your work. They probably won't read your paper linearly, they will mine it for information. Because of this, your paper should have a boring structure. To allow fast information seeking. In any case, they are not there to entertain themselves, though a well written paper can be entertaining and that's way better in my opinion, but it's not the point.

Your mainstream journal article should, however, be as enjoyable and entertaining as possible to read otherwise it won't be read by many people (especially if they are only vaguely interested in the topic of your article), or worse, the journal will not be bought at all if all the articles are dull. At least, that's what the lecturer in this video is saying.

This article is more of a literature overview, and it's a book chapter (if I'm not mistaken). The "normal" you refer to is probably an empirical study defending a theory in a journal. That's a different format. First, because there's a clear goal that can be summarized (my theory is right!), and second, because journals give you a much more limited number of pages.
I find this philosophical phenomenon itself interesting: it seems impossible to speak about sexuality-related topics without ideological bias. You can't just study human sexuality like you would study baboons and write what is purely logical given the actual observations, you always have to think about what are people going to feel about what you write. It would be interesting to define why is this particular subject so special.
I don't think it's possible With baboons or anything for that matter. Human sexuality is just put under the microscope for such things. Obvious examples are the ape sign language studies.
Is it so special, or is it a universal problem in social science? The example of sex from the article is instructive: from a purely hard-science biological perspective, sex is studied without controversy.
You can call it ideological bias, but I think it comes down to everything that is related to humans and society, not only sex. Human sexuality implies psychology, which is linked to mass psychology and hence society. A study that excludes these factors must be very narrowly restricted to e.g. purly medical issues. This can make sense in such clearly defined domains, but as soon as you broaden things to sexuality in general, you have to take context into account.
> it seems impossible to speak about sexuality-related topics without ideological bias

Yup, I find in many otherwise rational people all reasoning faculties seem to evaporate when trying to have an unbiased conversation about this area today, kind of like a religion almost. The following paragraph from the paper pretty much sums up my experience. I just don't bother discussing any of it with anyone in person any more, it's tainted.

> one should note that, from an egalitarian perspective, differences are better tolerated if they reflect positively on a group that is perceived as underprivileged or oppressed (e.g., findings of higher verbal ability in females tend to be less controversial than findings of higher spatial and mathematical ability in males).

It's a shame because I think we would move forward faster as a society if it was easier to talk about these things openly without worrying about offending people... how can we overcome unfair biases in society if we do not investigate and understand them properly.

I think the "offending people" is the key here. Why do some people have deep emotional investments over whether some fact is true or false?
Maybe because those facts have been used as arguments of oppression.
That a observably true thing can be used to justify bad things, does not mean its untrue.

I'm quoting myself from https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=31595298:

> People see that "men and women are different" is used as justification for prejudice (like a person not getting a chance because people of the same sex did rarely have success previously). Which sucks and people feel its unfair. And when trying to conceptualize that unfairness into words, their contra opinion sometimes ends up being "so man and women must be equal" instead of "a persons sex does not justify prejudice".

>It would be interesting to define why is this particular subject so special.

Christianity, Catholicism in particular - perversion of human sexuality is one of its pillars. You can see this in their fight against reproductive rights and sexual minorities.

Just like a few centuries ago you couldn't study the origins of religious texts. What we are seeing is a cult of genitals and skin color raising rapidly, and just like then, discussing any of its dogmas or its priests is heresy.
TIL evolutionary psychology is a thing :/

Well, I don't believe that evolution has anything to do with psychology, except being a huge random factor. While evolution had impact on human psychology, it is not something that can be explored with science, there are no reasons (or: too many), no concepts (or: all of them too blurry to be useful), no laws, and no way to verify anything.

The following is a Twitter account which only posts snark about the "field" of evolutionary psychology: https://nitter.cz/evopsychgoogle

It's a bunch of postdictions and unfalsifiable just-so stories. It also seems to hate women.

I'm out of the loop, can you tell me why evolutionary psychology isn't a consistent concept?
How would you test it? There's lots of factors influencing someone's psychology; how would you pick them apart to prove causes? The field's dumb.
There are a lot of fields of study that we accept despite these flaws. Economics and social sciences are prime examples. But for some reason it’s evolutionary psychology that revs people up so much.

The idea is even not that controversial: “The need to survive might have affected human psychology - especially the learned part”.

> There are a lot of fields of study that we accept despite these flaws. Economics and social sciences are prime examples.

Who's we?

I'm sick and tired of people saying this. It sounds like this: "This is a map of Middle Earth, not Stalingrad." "But at least we have a map! What's your alternative, you complainer?" "But it's not a map of a real place!" "We'll use this map - flawed as it is - to plan our invasion of Stalingrad."

I want my science rigorous. Or else it isn't science.

The collective “we”, which is largely independent of your individual opinion.

The problem is not that we have a faulty map. It’s that you pretend it’s irreversibly faulty.

We’ve successfully navigated quite a bit of trouble and chances are that we’ll be able to do so in the future.

What you are suggesting sounds a lot like: let’s do nothing.

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Economics would be parallel to psychology, not evolutionary psychology. I believe that descriptive psychology is a science.

E.g. eventually they will be able to determine the result of the Milgram experiment, and it will become a fact, a building block in our view of the world, and it will affect our decisions mostly positively. They just need to make enough experiments.

Evolutionary psychology is descriptive psychology with the assumption that closely related evolutionary paths can be used for comparative study.
Maybe you can come up with a particularly stringent conceptualization of what is or isn’t science, and maybe some fields of inquiry won’t meet that bar (like cosmology?), but that doesn’t make them “dumb”. Even without testability you can still reason about the likelihood of things.
The physical nature of sexuality isn't an issue that affects many

> the frequency of intersex is almost certainly less than 0.02%

is the quote in the paper.

( More broadly, the 'restricted' definition falls just under that percentage:

> "conditions in which chromosomal sex is inconsistent with phenotypic sex, or in which the phenotype is not classifiable as either male or female", the prevalence of intersex is about 0.018% )

However on a societal scale it is sufficient number of people to present issues that need addressing.

1 in 2,000 is 10 in 20,000 is 100 in 200,000 is 1,000 in 2 million (the ~ pop. of my state capital city) is 10,000 at least in Australia (now well past 20 million).

This is more than enough to justify the changes to the Australian passport system made decades ago, expanding what was previously a forced binary choice to better represent actual reality.

And yet, our author of the linked paper still moves to claim:

> This has not stopped the misconception that “sex is not binary” from spreading, ...

mere paragraphs after agreeing on the frequency of the clearly non binary people.

Binary with a 0.02% error rate
Better discription (roughly) of the purely physical case.

ie. Not binary - and can't be accurately represented as such on medical forms and other places with things matter.

You might also say these cases are much more frequent than gold in the crust.

You are writing a client for an API, to be deployed at scale. The API returns objects of type A or B, but occasionally returns something else - not as an error, it's just what happens to be in the server's database. You'd still write code and test-cases to deal with the not-A-or-B instances, right?
>You'd still write code and test-cases to deal with the not-A-or-B instances, right?

I've seen this one before. It was called the something something solution and was very popular in Germany a while back.

But this is not an API and it is a disorder so equivalent to an error. But who says you wouldn't want to handle it in either case?
Sex, the process in humans where anisogamy (sexual reproduction involving two types of gametes that differ in size) produces new humans is a binary one. Notwithstanding disorders of sexual development (‘intersex’) there are only two gametes, and hence only two sexes.
Your math is slightly wrong.

.018% of 2000 is about 1/3 (.36). So, its 1 in 6k and 3600 in Australia.

The numbers are miniscule and I believe arguments made using this group and trying to apply it to society as a whole is likely not made in good faith.

I would be willing to bet that most people who bring up intersex individuals when talking about a 'sex binary' would be unwilling to agree to: "We have male, female, and medically-intersex as the sex."

Similarly we have one headed and two headed individuals. Therefore we must use the plural they as the default pronoun as to not cause offense to people already struggling with acceptance.
I skimmed his paper and then reread other papers I have on intersex .. the frequency estimates vary but we're ballpaking.

The key thing is that is lower bound as 0.18% comes from a fairly well accepted restrive definition of intersex, there's a larger pool of "commonly accepted as intersex".

So, we can at least agree that these people exist.

> I believe arguments made using this group and trying to apply it to society as a whole is likely not made in good faith.

That's your belief of what others are trying to do and I believe you may be misrepresenting and casting as homogeneous these "others".

Your in good comapny here, the author of the paper does the same in his initial paragraphs when casts "feminists" as a near monolith with a predominant belief. Clearly he hasn't gotten out much.

Fo my part I'm a pragmatic data science, mainly geophyics with a dash of consulting.

I take issue with livestock tracking software that cannot accept by design in breeding patterns - this is something that happens in reality.

I also take issue with older versions of religuos genealogy programs that cannot deal with cycles in a graph representation of a family "tree" - as abhorent as fathers having offsring with daughters may be it's a reality that must be dealt with in order to correctly document Pharohs, Royalty, and various families from the backwoods.

In the same manner it's just poor software practice to restrict fields for Sex: to a simplistic two value entry when clearly the real world is different to that imained or desired.

>> I believe arguments made using this group and trying to apply it to society as a whole is likely not made in good faith.

> That's your belief of what others are trying to do and I believe you may be misrepresenting and casting as homogeneous these "others".

Correct, it is my belief of those using this group in arguments, but I do not believe a boogey man "others" as I think this group is disparate enough that over time it will eat itself. The problem with purity tests is that eventually everyone fails it.

Regarding my opinion that you cast doubt on - maybe we can prove me wrong right now. Do you believe a persons biologic sex is male, female, and medically-intersex-from-birth?

Given that we're talking about whether or not the passport should have additional options, and are citing this % as a reason for providing additional options, it's important to ask:

Q: How do we know that the people who want more than 2 options for sex are, in fact, these same 0.018% of the population who have DSDs?

In my limited experience, they are not the same people at all. Clair [https://differently-normal.com/author/clarecais/] has CAIS, and has "F" on her passport. Statistically, non-binary people have no DSD, and are unambiguously either M or F but wish to identify as something else. Therefore making an arguing for additional options in the passport sex field using an intersex stat is precisely what Clair complains about in her blog: ie, she's pulled into a fairly toxic social/political debate by a group that wants to use her condition for its own gains.

Clare is one data point of course, but her slant tallies with the assertion that "arguments made using this group and trying to apply it to society as a whole is likely not made in good faith".

...and of the 0.018%, how many "identify" as non-binary? Many individuals with DSDs (aka "intersex" conditions) don't appreciate it when their medical condition is used by LGBQTIA+ organisations that usually do nothing to help them with the medical complications they can have.

Clare talks about living with DSD, including the serious medical complications that can go hand-in-hand with them. It's a very interesting blog, particularly the top two posts:

https://differently-normal.com/author/clarecais/

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I think that allows the conclusion that sex is binary. 1 in 2000 people are born with limb defects and still humans remain a bipedal species. You can still add it to the passport and use different titles and whatnot. But the science is pretty clear about why and how many sexes there are.

There are some plants and animals that can change sex if the environment forces them to, but humans don't have such mechanisms. Guppies and weed come to mind, perhaps there is an ancestor of humans that could do that as well.

You are right, yet the society is struggling exactly with what to add to the passport. And if you think about, why exactly do they need the gender/sex in the passport at all, in the age of biometrics? Isn't this a moot discussion? People fighting about a useless point, that's all what I see.
We're not.

We're struggling with the decision of letting a one handed man identify as two handed and vice versa.

The utter most ridiculousness of this mental gymnastics is calling women "womb carriers", that the sex treated as a baby incubator would have a problem with this is beyond some people apparently.

Qui prodest? Or rather, qui afficitur? One/two handed is not on the passport either, although it would make a much better identifier (for human agents).
It's not ok to celebrate peoples erasure.
I imagine border control find it helpful to have sex on the passport because in 99% of cases it’s an easily observable identifying characteristic.
Dunno about you folks but I haven't flaunted me willy in a long while at the gates. Joke aside, I said "biometrics" - in which a camera and a fingerprint scanner can do way better than feeling my underwear.
You can identify sex with high reliability just by looking at someone’s face in the vast majority of cases. Not in every case, but in the vast majority.
How is this relevant to a biometric border check?
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Same logic could be used to say that: No, humans ackchyually don't have 46 chromosomes, because you see these rare mutations or defects can cause them to have different number.

Sometimes exceptions are just that, exceptions.

Fine, the discussion is only what we do about the exceptions? Sweeping them under carpet is not okay - exceptions are still citizens of the country and entitled to the same rights. What if there's a one born with two heads, should the country force them to chop one off because the passport has only room for one picture? Even if it's only one person, that person has the same right to travel freely as anybody else, so it needs a solution.
That a classification exists does not imply everyone has to comply to it. Either you classify as female, or you classify as male, maybe both, maybe neither.

I don't know if you observe that too, but when i ride in the tram, i see individuals who neither pass as male or female. Not due to queerness, its because they have ambiguous bodies and don't perform their gender via their clothes or makeup or something like that. I'd argue that gender nonconformity was always there.

That's the solution then - Male & Female should be checkboxes not radio buttons.
Saying that sex is not binary because there is <0.02% intersex prevalence is exactly the type of ideological mental gymnastics that the author aims at.
That paragraph does not describe the frequency of 'non binary' people.

It describes the frequency of chromosomal sex appearing inconsistent with phenotypic sex or where phenotypic sex is indeterminate on observation due to rare pathologies.

It's biology not ideology.

The paper itself is written from a very ideologically biased point of view.
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No, I think the author made his real point deep in the paper and you are supporting it. Read his conclusion.

Hostility, contempt, and derision is used to attack those that have "the wrong" research or even attempts to broach the topic. We are in the middle of a movement where even teaching about sex differences is becoming difficult or impossible.

> This absolute moron

> they're often projecting

> Gee, I wonder how gametes can make a career choice? Maybe they can calculate pi too?

> This paper is kinda funny

QED

No, I think the author made no point whatsoever that he didn't himself debunk with contradictory statements not even a few paragraphs later, peddled anecdotal pseudoscience and attempted to decry any criticisms as attempts at silencing or censorship, starting with the title of the paper itself.

The hostility and derision is used to attack not those who are simply wrong and seeking to start a discussion so they can learn more, but those who attempt to frame their wrongness as if it's right, especially when motivated by ideology, like this clearly is.

Just like those peddling horse-dewormer as a COVID cure, honestly, what do you expect? Such is the freedom of speech, when you say something really really dumb, like that evolutionary psychology is real, people telling you that you might be really really dumb isn't some conspiracy out to get you or your viewpoint, it's just a natural reaction when confronted with stupidity.

I could equally make the claim that I'm met with hostility and derision because I have the "wrong research" on how the Earth is actually flat, and the science community is clearly part of a conspiracy to censor me.

> We are in the middle of a movement where even teaching about sex differences is becoming difficult or impossible

[Citation Needed]

But of course there will never be a real citation here because you're just demonstrating more of the same persecution complex that the author also has. Kids are still taught about chromosomes and all that.

But talking about how it's difficult to teach kids about binary sex definitions and bizarre pseudoscience about how evolution selected women to be in the kitchen is the equivalent of saying how it's difficult to teach kids how Pluto is a planet.

Curriculums evolve as our understanding of things evolves, so as a society it's our duty to make sure to add the nuance necessary to give people a more complete understanding of the world, which can only ever be a good thing.

The funny aspect of what I said is of course referring to the repeated self-owns within the paper, I mean, sheesh, if you're gonna peddle your unremarkable anti-science ideology at least be consistent. How can you argue for an end-all, be-all definition and then proceed to debunk it in the next paragraph? I guess reading what you wrote wasn't an evolutionary advantageous skill

Referring to your "[Citation Needed]" it was a quote from the paper referenced in the last paragraph which I cited in my original statement. The persecution complex you refer to is quoting the actual paper in the exact location I specified.

Look man, I'm not sure where the hostility is coming from but you obviously have something you need to get off your chest. If you want to vent it here you can if you agree to not vent it on someone else later.

My "[Citation Needed]" was for the original claim you seem to agree with, neither you nor the paper's author provide evidence for this claim or substantiate it.

Hence I'm asking for a source. The author doesn't have one, do you? Not just clickbait articles either, but proper research that establishes not only that curriculum regarding sex differences has been altered on a large scale to exclude any mention of established sex differences, but that it was not caused by evolution of our understanding of the concept and the on-going debate surrounding it, but by a defined political force that could be constituted as a "movement."

As it stands, the paper doesn't do that, so it's conclusions are just ramblings of no substance.

Of course, as I said, I'm not getting said source, because no such thing exists and with your comment dodging the question as well, I was proven right.

QED?

Furthermore, neither you nor the author even elaborate on what this movement is, or what exactly is it doing. Hence my comment regarding persecution complexes.

Imagining some vaguely defined "movement" that is allegedly doing a vaguely-defined something that is framed as disagreeable is exactly what a persecution complex is.

Oh and nice try with the accusation of "hostility". I see you've learned a great deal from this paper when it comes to deflecting criticism.

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This paper doesn't sit right with me. To establish rigid, biological definitions of some of the most debated terms is fine of course, as long as it makes your own research and writing clearer. What's weird is expecting others to have used the same definition in their writing. To use the word "bias" to describe that discrepancy is not really doing justice to other viewpoints and it seems like the author has failed to live up to his own ideals:

> The dialectic can remain healthy as long as multiple viewpoints are allowed and ideas are evaluated on their own merits.

The main point of the paper is to discuss what the author describes as a feminist bias in academic psychology, which he says systematically distorts certain domains of research.

The paper then attacks this "bias" from multiple angles, which makes the paper quite hard to follow. The first angle is that feminism fundamentally misunderstands the nature of sex:

> The flaws of the sex-gender distinction have led some feminist > scholars to adopt the hybrid term “sex/gender” (sometimes > “gender/sex”) as a way to recognize that biological and social > factors are inseparable [...] Unfortunately, this terminological > fusion may end up deepening the conceptual confusion. [...] On this > view, the “sex binary” is a socially constructed fiction; the old > idea that there are two sexes is simplistic and inaccurate, and does > not stand up to sophisticated analysis [...] This argument can be > seductive but has one problem—it fundamentally misunderstands the > nature of sex.

He goes on to explain why "the biological definition of sex is not just one option among many equally valid alternatives", but in fact the only valid definition. "The sex binary, then, is not a fiction but a basic biological fact".

Here's the definition from the paper:

"From a biological standpoint, what distinguishes the males and females of a species is the size of their gametes: males produce small gametes (e.g., sperm), females produce large gametes."

Stating this definition as a fact is very strange. Clearly we used these terms long before this definition existed, for example.

The section that reviews introductory textbooks is simply confusing. It states that this "quick survey illustrates many of the trends I discussed earlier" and complains that some of them are completely silent on the issue of sex differences, but also acknowledges that there "there is quite a bit of variation in coverage, and a few outliers that deviate from the general". To summarize: out of 14 textbooks that the author looked at, some didn't mention the issue at all, some did but not enough, but some did. I don't find this to be a clear illustration of the author's points.

The review of journal papers is equally confusing. 19 papers were selected based on publication year, journal, title and abstract. In the authors words, the selected papers "reveals a fair amount of theoretical diversity, but also a pervasive tendency to emphasize socialization over biology and downplay robust empirical findings as “stereotypes”. The methodology is extremely unclear. If I got it right, 19 papers where chosen by the author - some where emphasizing socializing over biology, and some took an "explicitly evolutionary approach". Again, not a very convincing way to demonstrate bias - except perhaps in your own selection.

It goes on. I'd like to write more but I think these issues speak for themselves.

There is a small step from stating that line between “social” and “biological” is blurry to getting that that line is as arbitrary as everything else, but instead of taking that step people stick to construction of all kinds of “evil enemies” messing with their nice and clear pictures. Philosophy is still the mother of all sciences, and this is an example of an education that lacks it.

Then there are observations of specific theories being used as obedience building exercises by various bureaucrats (and wannabe bureaucrats), which seems to be widespread, and is bad, but doesn't actually say anything about the theories themselves. Sacred oaths can be anything, they don't even need to have any meaning.